It's not a surprise to most people that organic foods are
priced higher than conventionally processed foods. College students who want to
eat healthier in the long term without spending too much money do not have many
choices, if any at all, to obtain fresh food – especially those who live on
campus or have limited transportation. For my pitch I am proposing a service
and app called Fresh Campus which aims to provide fresh, organic food at a
lower price through a community garden system.
Hi Roy,
ReplyDeleteI think you have a great idea to help college students get more organic food. I thought your pitch was clear and concise which helped to get your idea across. I think that one way to improve it would be to emote a some more because you had the same facial expression throughout the whole video. Overall great job!
Hi Roy,
ReplyDeleteExcellent job on your Pitch. Fresh Campus would be terrific if you can pull it off! For the most part, I like to eat as fresh and organic as possible. But as you said, the cost are so much higher than non-organic products. But to be able to lower the costs, thereby making the food more affordable, someone needs to be losing (making less) money, right? If the food is grown by a professional and delivered, plus a 6-month (minimum) membership fee must be paid, it sounds like the cost would be higher. I love the idea, but more information on the numbers would make your pitch solid! Great job!
Great idea Roy! As a college student I know exactly what you mean when you say it's hard to stay healthy at school. A community garden would have so many benefits, not just health ones. Figuring out how to work out the logistics is probably going to be the hardest part of this idea, but in the end I think this idea will help out so many people! Great job!
ReplyDeleteHello Roy, you are one of the few pitches I have seen that has been done very well from all aspects. Your presenting skills and your pitch idea are done very clear and concise. If anything to add would be some numbers in there to give a price comparison or a way for people to make connection on how this is a good one even if they aren't healthy eaters themselves.
ReplyDeleteHey Roy, overall I think you did well on your pitch. My only suggestion would be to introduce the fact that you're targeting college students a little earlier on in the pitch.
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